Benjamin L. Stewart

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Adan

  1. I would avoid linking documents to the cloud since the user cannot access them. Upload all text as a page within your portfolio.

  2. Create a separate page for each artifact.

  3. Embed videos instead of linking to them.

  4. Personalize your eportfolio by include a photo of you on the main page and a link to your linked page that’s easy to find.

Alexia

  1. Create a separate page for each artifact (assignment, essay, etc.).

  2. Create an “about me” page with your educational philosophy and a easy-to-find link to your LinkedIn profile.

Alondra

Great eportfolio! Just check again the link to your LinkedIn profile and include the public link. A public link is one where the user does not have to sign in to access.

Alonso

  1. I would include your photo on your main page.

  2. Check your spelling.

  3. I don’t see any assignments from Units I & II.

Andrea

  1. Add your name and photo to your home page.

  2. Create a separate page for each artifact (assignment, etc.).

  3. Avoid using any cloud service and instead add content directly to your portfolio. The only except might be embedded videos.

Monse

  1. Include your complete name and a photo of yourself on your home page.

  2. Check your spelling.

  3. Each artifact (i.e., assignment, essay, etc.) should have its own page.

  4. Avoid using any cloud-based service (i.e., OneDrive, etc.).

  5. Make sure the link to your LinkedIn profile is easy to find. Consider an “about me” page.

Day

  1. Embed any videos you have within the page so the user can access them without having to leave your eportfolio.

  2. I don’t see any artifacts from Units I, II, III, and IV for Writing Workshop.

Diana

  1. Create a separate page for each artifact.

  2. I couldn’t find a URL to your public LinkedIn page (online resume).

  3. Create an eportfolio entirely in English.

  4. Remove any extraneous information.

Eli

Well done Eli! My only suggestion would be to make sure each of your artifacts are large enough to be easily read (e.g., poems). Also, I didn’t see the URL to your public LinkedIn profile (online resume).

Erika

  1. Remove any extraneous information (e.g., Summary, etc.).

  2. I only see assignments from Units III & IV.

Fernando

  1. I don’t see the URL to your LinkedIn Profile (online resume).

  2. I would create a separate page for each artifact.

  3. I only see one essay.

  4. Check spelling.

Jazmin

  1. Make sure the entire eportfolio is in English.

  2. Avoid any artifacts (assignments, etc.) on the home page.

  3. Create a separate page for each artifact or type of artifact.

  4. Create a hypertext URL to your LinkedIn profile.

  5. I don’t see the second essay.

Gaby

  1. I would include an introduction or greeting on your home page.

  2. I don’t see artifacts from Units I & III (the essays).

  3. Add images to your poetry and even you reciting your poems!

Lizeth

  1. Create a page for each artifact or type of artifact.

2. There is an audio or video that does not play.

  1. I don’t see all of the assignments we completed this semester in your eportfolio.

Angie

I really like your eportfolio, but include the entire essay. In fact, I don’t see your second essay.

Cruz

Your link is broken… I am unable to access your eportfolio.

Cielo

I like your eportfolio, well done. I don’t see one of your essays, however.

Majo

  1. Remove all personal information from your eportfolio! Student ID, email, etc.

  2. Create a separate page for each artifact or type of artifact (i.e., assignment).

  3. Entire eportfolio should be in English.

  4. Create a URL to your LinkedIn profile.

  5. I don’t see references for your essays.

Max

Good work, Max, but I don’t see your second essay.

Jackie

Good work, Jackie. My only suggestion might be to create separate pages so that not all of your artifacts are published on one page.

Monica

Monica, I like how you have designed your eportfolio but avoid using any cloud service like Google Drive, etc. Also, include separate pages for each artifact or type of artifact.

Naydelyn

I am not able to access your published Google site.

Nelly

Good work, Nelly. However, I only see one of the two essays we completed this semester.

Leo

Good work, Leo!

Sigrid

Well done Sigrid. My only suggestion might be to create separate subpages for each type of artifact.

Susy

Well done Susy. My only suggestion might be to create separate subpages for each type of artifact.

Vanessa

UPTC credit;

Yaisha

  1. I don’t see one of your essays.

2: Include separate pages within your eportfolio for each type of artifact (assignment).

Rafael

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