Writing II Module 11

Monday

Instruction

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Final changes to your expository essay should be made by the end of April 6, 2026 (in Expository Essays).

  • For those who have not completed a first draft…

    đź’ˇ Today is the last day to complete your expository essay.

  • Group Feedback for those who have completed a first draft (five paragraphs) and those working on increasing your originality score.

    1. If you are working on increasing your originality score, see ELT Cast 126: How to increase one’s originality score when writing an academic text.

    2. Five paragraphs, between 120-180 words between 5-8 sentences

    3. Title with 6-12 words, centered, bold, main words are capitalized.

    4. Formatting five paragraphs: double space, regular indentation of 0.5 inch indentation, avoid extra spacing,

    5. Formatting references: French (hanging) indentation, single space within each reference and double space between each reference

    6. Topic sentences: begins with the main clause, Begins with a noun clause (no subject pronouns), no linking verbs (”to be”, “to become”, etc.) in the main clause. Copula (linking) verbs

    7. Introduction Paragraph: Hook, background (one citation), thesis statement

    8. Conclusion Paragraph: restate and reword thesis statement, significance, closing statement.

    9. Check for Acceptable fonts (APA).

    10. Avoids and phrases to avoid…

      1. people

      2. there is/are

      3. Demonstratives

      4. important, importance, importantly, it is important, it is essential, it is vital

      5. population

      6. very Why avoid “very”?

      7. “can”, Modal verbs

    11. Check to see that each citation has a reference and each reference has a citation.

    12. The M.E.A.L. Plan: A Comprehensive Approach to Paragraph Development:

Action Steps - Peer Feedback

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Your objective is to partner up with a classmate to check each other’s work based on what we discuss today in class.

  1. Leave comments in your writing partner’s Word document in Expository Essays.

Tuesday

Instruction

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Today in class I will ask that each of you confirm if what you currently have in Teams is your final draft.

  • Conferences

    1. Andrea E

    2. Daniela

    3. Diana

    4. Jesus

  • Group Feedback for those who have completed a first draft (five paragraphs) and those working on increasing your originality score.

    1. If you are working on increasing your originality score, see ELT Cast 126: How to increase one’s originality score when writing an academic text.

    2. Five paragraphs, between 120-180 words between 5-8 sentences

    3. Title with 6-12 words, centered, bold, main words are capitalized.

    4. Formatting five paragraphs: double space, regular indentation of 0.5 inch indentation, avoid extra spacing,

    5. Formatting references: French (hanging) indentation, single space within each reference and double space between each reference

    6. Topic sentences: begins with the main clause, Begins with a noun clause (no subject pronouns), no linking verbs (”to be”, “to become”, etc.) in the main clause. Copula (linking) verbs

    7. Introduction Paragraph: Hook, background (one citation), thesis statement

    8. Conclusion Paragraph: restate and reword thesis statement, significance, closing statement.

    9. Check for Acceptable fonts (APA).

    10. Avoids and phrases to avoid…

      1. people

      2. there is/are

      3. Demonstratives

      4. important, importance, importantly, it is important, it is essential, it is vital

      5. population

      6. very Why avoid “very”?

      7. “can”, Modal verbs

    11. Check to see that each citation has a reference and each reference has a citation.

    12. The M.E.A.L. Plan: A Comprehensive Approach to Paragraph Development:

    13. All comments should be removed from your final draft of your expository essay.

Action Steps - Peer Feedback

  1. Will vary.

Wednesday

Instruction

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Today we begin thinking about forming an argument.

  • Argumentative examples

    1. Prompt 1: Take a position: Artificial Intelligence should be used by students as a personalized tutor rather than being banned as a cheating tool.

    2. Prompt 2: Argue one side: Digital literacy is now more important than traditional literacy (reading and writing on paper) in the modern workforce.

    3. Prompt 3: Agree or disagree: Universities should prioritize funding for STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Math) over the Arts and Humanities to meet global economic demands.

  • List of topics

    Student Argumentative Topic Assignments

    StudentAssigned Topic
    AlejandroGovernments should ban single-use plastic bags nationwide.
    AlexaWorking from home is more productive than working in an office.
    AlondraSocial media does more harm than good for teenagers.
    AnahiAll high school students should complete community service hours to graduate.
    Andrea EPublic transportation should be free in large cities.
    Andrea JAnimal testing for medical research should be allowed.
    AngelSchool uniforms improve student behavior and academic performance.
    AngelesCompanies should be restricted from collecting personal data without consent.
    CarlosStudents learn better from digital textbooks than from printed textbooks.
    CaroMuseums and cultural sites should have free entry for students.
    DaniTechnology is making people less able to communicate face-to-face.
    DaynedThe use of smartphones should be prohibited during class time.
    EduardoIt is better to live in a big city than in a small town.
    ItzelGovernments should invest more in renewable energy than in fossil fuels.
    JesusSchools should use AI tools to help grade student writing.
    KarlaExams are the best way to evaluate students’ learning.
    KarolCountries should prioritize economic growth even if it harms the environment.
    KaterynPeople should be required to vote in national elections.
    MassielThe legal driving age should be raised to 18 (or higher).
    MonsteOnline friendships can be as meaningful as in-person friendships.
    NaomiGovernments should provide free university education to all qualified students.
    NataliaIt is better to start working after high school than to attend university.
    NubiaFast food advertising should include stronger health warnings.
    PerlaPublic libraries are still essential in the digital age.
    RenataSchools should teach practical life skills (cooking, taxes, repairs).
    RubiTourism benefits local communities more than it harms them.
    SaidPeople should be allowed to own private cars in city centers.
    SamantaWatching movies is a better way to learn a language than reading books.
    SelenaGovernments should limit children’s time playing online games.

Action Steps

  1. Bookmark and begin reviewing Writing II: Unit III - Argumentative Essay.
  • Strategy

    1. Take a side or choose a position. What do you support?

    2. Based on your experiences, list three to five examples that support your position. Do not look up anything, refer to any websites, etc.

    3. Create a topic sentence (main idea) of your point, your position, or one that supports the side you are taking.

    4. Describe the examples you listed in two (evidence) sentences and state what, how, why, when, where, with whom, etc. Again, examples should be based on your experiences, so no citations and avoid looking anything up.

    5. Create one analysis sentence where you comment, explain, analyze, etc.

    6. Conclude your paragraph with a linking sentence that would segue into another paragraph or you may include a summarizing sentence.

  1. Will discuss in class…

Thursday

Instruction

Bookmark and begin reviewing Writing II: Unit III - Argumentative Essay.

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Today we begin thinking about forming an argument.

  • List of argumentative topics

    StudentAssigned Topic
    AlejandroGovernments should require restaurants to display carbon-footprint labels on menus.
    AlexaUniversity classes should adopt a four-day week schedule.
    AlondraSchools should start later in the morning for students aged 15–18.
    AnahiPublic libraries should loan more than books (tools, cameras, or tablets) for free.
    Andrea ECities should charge a fee for driving cars into downtown areas to reduce traffic.
    Andrea JCollege students should be required to take a course on media literacy and misinformation.
    AngelSchools should replace most traditional exams with project-based assessments.
    AngelesSocial media companies should be legally responsible for removing harmful misinformation quickly.
    CarlosStudents should be allowed to use AI writing assistants if they disclose and reflect on the use.
    CaroGovernments should subsidize healthy foods (fruit and vegetables) more than processed foods.
    DaniEmployers should prioritize skills-based hiring over requiring a university degree.
    DaynedSmartphones should be allowed in class only for specific learning tasks, not for personal use.
    DianaSchools should teach a required course on artificial intelligence literacy (how AI tools work, their limits, and ethical use).
    EduardoCountries should limit short-term rentals (like Airbnb) to protect local housing.
    ItzelGovernments should invest more in public parks and green spaces than in new highways.
    JesusUniversities should provide free mental health counseling sessions to all students.
    KarlaSchools should require students to learn basic personal finance (budgeting, credit, taxes).
    KarolGovernments should ban targeted advertising to minors online.
    KaterynVoting should be optional, but election day should be a national holiday.
    MassielCity governments should expand bike lanes even if it reduces space for cars and parking.
    MonsteStreaming platforms should be required to limit auto-play features to reduce screen addiction.
    NaomiUniversities should cap tuition increases based on inflation to keep education affordable.
    NataliaCompanies should offer paid internships instead of unpaid internships in all fields.
    NubiaFast food restaurants should be restricted from opening within a certain distance of schools.
    PerlaSchools should require a minimum number of reading hours per week across all subjects.
    RenataGovernments should require companies to provide at least two weeks of paid sick leave.
    RubiTourist destinations should limit the number of visitors per day to protect local culture and nature.
    SamantaSchools should include a mandatory course on respectful communication and conflict resolution.
    SelenaParents should delay giving children a personal smartphone until at least age 14.

Action Steps

  1. Evidence should be descriptive by answering any of the following question words: what, why, when, where, how, with whom, etc. Avoid subjective tone: “it is important”, “it is great/good…”

  2. Even though evidence should be specific examples, avoid transitional phrases like, “For example…” or “For instance”, etc. Your first evidence sentence does not require a transition, but your second evidence sentence could include an addition-type of sentence connector: Also, in addition to…, additionally, moreover, furthermore, besides, equally, as well as, etc.

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Considerations:

  1. Find your assigned argumentative topic listed above. Take a side or choose a position. What do you support? You should only choose one position.

  2. Write your name and date at the top of a clean sheet of paper.

  3. Below your name and date, write your assigned topic listed above.

  4. Below your assigned topic, list three to five specific examples - from personal experience - that support your position. Do not look up any information online.

  5. Below your brainstorming list of specific examples, develop one five-sentence paragraph.

    1. Create a topic sentence (main idea) of your point, your position, or one that supports the side you are taking.

    2. Describe the examples you listed in two (evidence) sentences and state what, how, why, when, where, with whom, etc. Again, examples should be specific and should be based on your experiences, so no citations and avoid looking anything up.

    3. Create one analysis sentence where you comment, explain, analyze, etc. that links the evidence to the main idea (topic sentence).

    4. Conclude your paragraph with a linking sentence that would segue into another paragraph or you may include a summarizing sentence.

  6. Below your paragraph, indicate whether you support the initial claim or counterclaim.

Friday

Instruction

Bookmark and begin reviewing Writing II: Unit III - Argumentative Essay.

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Today we’ll focus on defining an initial claim, counterclaim, and rebuttal.

  1. Review A Claim.

    1. An initial claim is the main position of the writer. The writer is for or against something or they agree or disagree with something.

    2. A counterclaim is to state what is wrong or weak about the initial claim.

    3. A rebuttal is to state what is wrong or weak about the counterclaim.

  • List of argumentative topics

    StudentAssigned Topic
    AlejandroGovernments should require restaurants to display carbon-footprint labels on menus.
    AlexaUniversity classes should adopt a four-day week schedule.
    AlondraSchools should start later in the morning for students aged 15–18.
    AnahiPublic libraries should loan more than books (tools, cameras, or tablets) for free.
    Andrea ECities should charge a fee for driving cars into downtown areas to reduce traffic.
    Andrea JCollege students should be required to take a course on media literacy and misinformation.
    AngelSchools should replace most traditional exams with project-based assessments.
    AngelesSocial media companies should be legally responsible for removing harmful misinformation quickly.
    CarlosStudents should be allowed to use AI writing assistants if they disclose and reflect on the use.
    CaroGovernments should subsidize healthy foods (fruit and vegetables) more than processed foods.
    DaniEmployers should prioritize skills-based hiring over requiring a university degree.
    DaynedSmartphones should be allowed in class only for specific learning tasks, not for personal use.
    DianaSchools should teach a required course on artificial intelligence literacy (how AI tools work, their limits, and ethical use).
    EduardoCountries should limit short-term rentals (like Airbnb) to protect local housing.
    ItzelGovernments should invest more in public parks and green spaces than in new highways.
    JesusUniversities should provide free mental health counseling sessions to all students.
    KarlaSchools should require students to learn basic personal finance (budgeting, credit, taxes).
    KarolGovernments should ban targeted advertising to minors online.
    KaterynVoting should be optional, but election day should be a national holiday.
    MassielCity governments should expand bike lanes even if it reduces space for cars and parking.
    MonsteStreaming platforms should be required to limit auto-play features to reduce screen addiction.
    NaomiUniversities should cap tuition increases based on inflation to keep education affordable.
    NataliaCompanies should offer paid internships instead of unpaid internships in all fields.
    NubiaFast food restaurants should be restricted from opening within a certain distance of schools.
    PerlaSchools should require a minimum number of reading hours per week across all subjects.
    RenataGovernments should require companies to provide at least two weeks of paid sick leave.
    RubiTourist destinations should limit the number of visitors per day to protect local culture and nature.
    SamantaSchools should include a mandatory course on respectful communication and conflict resolution.
    SelenaParents should delay giving children a personal smartphone until at least age 14.

Action Steps

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Make sure you write your paragraph as consecutive sentences and not a list of sentences.

  1. Find a partner who has a topic you want to counter or provide a rebuttal; that is, a topic that you can offer a counterclaim.

  2. Follow the same instructions as yesterday:

    1. Write your name and date at the top of a clean sheet of paper.

    2. Below your name and date, write your counterclaim or rebuttal to your partners position.

    3. Below your assigned topic, list three to five specific examples - from personal experience - that support your position. Do not look up any information online.

    4. Below your brainstorming list of specific examples, develop one five-sentence paragraph, writing in the third person and avoid subjective tone like saying, “it is good/better/worse”, etc.

      1. Create a topic sentence (main idea) of your point, your position, or one that supports the side you are taking.

      2. Describe the examples you listed in two (evidence) sentences and state what, how, why, when, where, with whom, etc. Again, examples should be specific and should be based on your experiences, so no citations and avoid looking anything up.

      3. Create one analysis sentence where you comment, explain, analyze, etc. that links the evidence to the main idea (topic sentence).

      4. Conclude your paragraph with a linking sentence that would segue into another paragraph or you may include a summarizing sentence.

  • For April 13, 2026, you will be asked to do the following based on an argumentative prompt provided in class:

    1. Find your assigned argumentative topic listed above. Take a side or choose a position. What do you support? You should only choose one position.

    2. Write your name and date at the top of a clean sheet of paper.

    3. Below your name and date, write your assigned topic listed above.

    4. Below your assigned topic, list three to five specific examples - from personal experience - that support your position. Do not look up any information online.

    5. Below your brainstorming list of specific examples, develop one five-sentence paragraph, writing in the third person and avoid subjective tone like saying, “it is good/better/worse”, etc.

      1. Create a topic sentence (main idea) of your point, your position, or one that supports the side you are taking.

      2. Describe the examples you listed in two (evidence) sentences and state what, how, why, when, where, with whom, etc. Again, examples should be specific and should be based on your experiences, so no citations and avoid looking anything up.

      3. Create one analysis sentence where you comment, explain, analyze, etc. that links the evidence to the main idea (topic sentence).

      4. Conclude your paragraph with a linking sentence that would segue into another paragraph or you may include a summarizing sentence.